International prices may vary. How to Write a Script Outline: You can create the most interesting character in the world, but without an equally interesting plot, the audience will not want to spend minutes with that person. But would they want to spend an hour and a half of their lives watching him swill alcohol, do drugs, and oogle women?
Share Why It Matters If your goal is to land an agent, pique the interest of a producer, or cause an actor to proclaim, "I have to play this role", you have no choice but to come out with guns blazing from Page One.
Agents, producers, actors, contest script readers -- or whomever you are lucky enough to get your script in front of -- will give you ten minutes of their time.
Getting interest in your story is a crap shoot most of the time. Here are 4 crucial tips to improve your odds. I believe this has begun to infect movie culture as well. This is why trailers have become a crucial advertising tool more than ever before -- companies have learned to create masterpieces in seconds to convince viewers they should spend two hours watching their film.
If nothing happens in the first 30 seconds, do you stick around? Set the tone immediately. Let the reader "feel" what your script is about in the first words on the page.
The Bourne Identity This is what I mean by "with guns blazing. At this point you want to read the next 9 pages, and probably the next A common mistake for screenwriters is to assume that to hook your reader, you need to write an over the top, Michael Bay style action sequence where the world is blown to pieces and your action hero has already escaped death six times.
As we go further in to the opening sequence of the Bourne Identity, we come to realize that Jason Bourne, our protagonist, has amnesia and has no idea how he ended up in the ocean -- and more importantly, he has no idea who he is. Some films can get away with the big action opener.
A perfect example is the famous opening sequences in the James Bond films; each film attempts to one-up the last with incredible action set-pieces.
But your John Doe is not James Bond. Jason Bourne was someone the audience connected to immediately -- we can all sense how terrifying it would be if we woke up one day and had lost all memory of our past, much less in the middle of a dark ocean. We want to see him figure out his life again. What is your John Doe going to make us feel?
What glimpses into his life will make us root him on to victory in the end? I am not stating that the opening scenes must be void of all action.
But in the process of your action sequence, you need to create story choices that make your reader feel a connection to the main character. This will help dictate just how much or how little action is needed to start your script off right.
We recognize quickly that while Riggs is a cop crazy enough to do whatever it takes to be the hero the clichehe goes one step further -- Riggs might actually be mentally insane.
In his first action scene, a drug bust goes wrong and ignites a gun fight, in which the bad guy eventually has Riggs at gunpoint while the cops close in.
What does Riggs do? First he yells at the cops to shoot the guy even though he might get hit himself, and then he turns to the bad guy and screams like mad to shoot him.
Ultimately, his insanity turns the tables -- the drug dealer is stunned by the madness and gives Riggs an opportunity to disarm him. We get entertaining action, but we get more. Now I want to read on. Apparently so did Warner Brothers; it spawned a four film franchise.
Create Questions To Be Answered This is the case for any genre of screenwriting, not just for action films. Why would the reader desire to keep going through your script if he has no questions he wants answered?
And guess where you script goes? Look at Die Hard. After an ominously upbeat opening scene with John McClane riding the streets of sunny California on Christmas Eve, he finds out his wife has reverted to her maiden name, they have an argument immediately upon meeting each other on screen, and Hans Gruber has shown up with his henchmen firing guns like mad and holding Nakatomi Plaza hostage.
All in ten minutes. Why is he in New York and she L. Both connect us to the human aspect of his character. Oh, and why the heck has Hans Gruber gone mad and taken over the building, forcing McClane to go rogue without any shoes on?
The first time I saw the film, I had no idea. But for the next minutes, my eyes never left the screen. Make your reader feel this excitement, fear, and genuine intrigue and to say to himself, "I have to read what happens next.
Marder was born in Chicago in Writer and licensed therapist Dan J. Marder offers some sage advice on how to take the opening of your action script to another level. Brian A. Klems October 16, at am. OK, folks, we’re ending this line of conversation.
I agree that the original argument was baseless as you don’t need to be an astronaut to write (successfully) about a main character who is an astronaut, and the same can be said for writing fight scenes.
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Nothing wrong with Jane Austen, but I’m not so sure you’d want her writing the next big action flick. I mean, if she were alive. Whatever. Anyway, the action scenes in the script just didn’t do anything for me.
The words were just laying there on the page. They didn’t pop out in a visually exciting manner. Sequences: Advanced Writing Technique. Adapted from Writers Workshop Script Doctor. Copyright © , , , Dorian Scott Cole Characters seldom discover a.
Action: The scene description, character movement, and sounds as described in a screenplay. For example: The sounds of TYPING rise above all the rest as MAX sits at his computer writing his essay.